You need a comma between the New and the Improving.
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Anonymous
Wed, 30 Sep 2009 13:24:26
A blessed wand of newtimproving.... the newt looks much better. The arch-newt hits!Wow, everything looks so cosmic! You pass out! You wake up. Everything looks so boring now... Dudley, killed by anewnewt
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Would have been OK, but I gotta give it a Fair because of the timing.
You pass out!
You wake up.
Everything looks so boring now...
Dudley, killed by anewnewt