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Dudley's (New, Improved) Dungeon

< Jan 12th, 2010 >ctaboir
You kill the Wizard 
of Yendor!       |  
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-|--|..-@;}---}} |- 
    |. |+}--^--} |  
  > |  |...^ ^|} |  
-------|.}--^--} |  
       | }}---}} |  
       | }}}}}}} |  
@ "Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away"
Double Trouble! -- |
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 | |   |  %      | |
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 | |   |   &L| |   |
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 |^    5 |<@@@d|   |
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@ "Now it looks as though they're here to stay"

d "Oh, I believe in yesterday"

The razor-sharp blad
cuts you in half!   
|   --   ---   --+- 
|   |    |  % --.^. 
|   |    |  ..-@... 
|   |    |  . --@^. 
|   --   ---   --+- 
|    --    ---      
--   ^---    ---- - 
@ "Suddenly, I'm not half the man I used to be"
The shade hits!     
|     |^  ----------
---|--- d.|      |  
      ....|      |  
 -----.V..- ^    |  
   | |...Z|      |  
-  ^ |.... ---------
|  | -.V..@...V     
|    |... |.& .     
@ "There's a shadow hanging over me"

d "Oh, I yesterday came suddenly"

"It's on the house!"
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---#    |.@&.|      
####   #-....|      
   #   #|....|##### 
   #   #|d....##### 
   #   #------      
@ "Why she had to go I don't know she wouldn't say"
The succubus demands
that you pay her,   
but you refuse...   
  |#    |....|      
---#    |.@&.|      
####   #-....|      
   #   c|....|##### 
   #   #|...d.##### 
   #   #------      
@ "I said something wrong, now I long for yesterday"
Time stands still   
while you and the   
succubus lie in     
each other's arms...
---#    |.@&.|      
####   #c....|      
   #   #|....|##### 
   #   #|....d##### 
   #   #------      
@ "Yesterday, love was such an easy game to play"
You are not wearing 
any armor.          
  |#    ------      
  |#    |....|      
---#    |.@..|      
####   #-c...|      
   #   #|....|##### 
   #   #|.....d#### 
   #   #------      
@ "Now I need a place to hide away"

d "Oh, I believe in yesterday"

Beatley, support from dogley for choirs
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6 Comments

#1 acheron Tue, 12 Jan 2010 02:36:24
E for Paul McCartn-E

#2 ctaboir Tue, 12 Jan 2010 15:39:44
At a time, I think putting a giant beetle in last panel, but well...
Last edited: Tue, 12 Jan 2010 15:50:05

#3 JackOfClubs Tue, 12 Jan 2010 16:43:24
A giant beetle would have been a good pun, but I think your succubus/cockatrice combo fits the lyric better. Nicely done.

#4 NorthBus Tue, 12 Jan 2010 17:34:15
Though funny all along, the punchline is the first in a while to actually make me "lol" at the office.

An E with applause, sir.

#5 Sorceror Tue, 12 Jan 2010 23:09:52
E for punchline in final frame.

#6 ctaboir Thu, 14 Jan 2010 13:19:13
Oh, I believe in yesterday's comic...

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