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Dudley's (New, Improved) Dungeon

< May 24th, 2009 >winn
You hear giggling and 
splashing.            
                      
                      
                      
                      
                      
          +           
          #@##########
                      
@ "What was that?"
                      
                      
      ----+---        
      |(((.((|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#.@.(|        
      ----|---        
          ############
                      
@ "Mirrors, sinks, chests and towels? Strange."
It is locked.         
                      
      ----+---        
      |(((.((|        
      |(#...@|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#...(|        
      ----|---        
          ############
                      
@ "Damn, they are all locked and I got no key!"
You hear lots of water
dripping onto the grou
      ----+---        
      |(((@((|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#...(|        
      ----|---        
          ############
                      
@ "Let's move on."
You enter the showers.
The succubi are shriek
                      
      --------        
      |&{&&{{|        
      |&&...&|        
      ----@---        
      |(((.((|        
      |(#...(|        
      |(#...(|        
@ "Oh, sh..."
                      
     ------------     
    /  REST IN   \    
   /    PEACE     \   
  /                \  
  |     Dudley     |  
  |   killed  by   |  
  |  an angry mob  |  
  |    of girls.   |  
|)|)((//||)\(\(|)\/(|)
Alternative ending: RIP Dudley killed by too much love.
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7 Comments

#1 Quint Sun, 24 May 2009 00:03:54
Alternative ending: RIP Dudley killed by fanservice

Also, there shouldn't be a period at the end of the tombstone message

Last edited: Sun, 24 May 2009 00:04:29

#2 acheron Sun, 24 May 2009 03:32:03
Was expecting water nymphs.

#3 DrSunglass Sun, 24 May 2009 05:05:13
Quint's ending is better.

#4 Anonymous Sun, 24 May 2009 06:31:20
Or maybe "RIP Dudley, killed by a nosebleed".

#5 Quint Sun, 24 May 2009 20:53:56
acheron: Yeah, that seems like a better idea.

DrSunglass: Ah, thanks.

Anonymous: No, that would be "RIP Dudley, killed by an animé nosebleed turning out to be all too real".

But that would only be if he were wearing an Amulet of Lacking a Fourth Wall. Or a Ring of Fridge Logic.

Last edited: Sun, 24 May 2009 20:54:39

#6 anther Mon, 25 May 2009 00:30:12
anime nosebleed? Is this something I should be looking up on TVTropes?

EDIT: Apparently it is. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Nosebleed

Last edited: Mon, 25 May 2009 00:33:47

#7 Sorceror Wed, 27 May 2009 03:39:01
Guys, guys.

"You have a strange forbidding feeling"

Would be better.

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