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Dudley's (New, Improved) Dungeon

< Jun 13th, 2009 >Orl
                    
                    
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  +............|    
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Dungeons of Doom    
@ "The Dungeons of Doom..."
  |.-...-- #--#     
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-----#.....>....--  
..--...-#-.......|  
#-.|..--...#...|.|  
|...-----.--#-##--  
Gnomish Mines       
@ "The Gnomish Mines..."
                    
                    
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|.>.|.........|...| 
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Vlad's Tower        
@ "Vlad's Tower..."
                    
                    
    ----------      
    |........|      
    |.<.o....|      
    |..o.oo..|      
    |..o....@|      
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Sauron's Tower      
@ "Huh? What's this? Sauron's tower?"
                    
                    
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    |.@......|      
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Sauron's Tower      
@ "I never saw it..."
                    
                    
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    |........|      
    |..oo....|      
    |...o...<|      
    |.@...T..|      
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Sauron's Tower      
@ "I wonder what I will find on the top..."
Several levels later
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         -----      
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         |...|      
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@ "Wow, those levels were ALL the same! Anyway, I think I'm on the topmost level, because the shape changed. Now, let's see... "

Read what? [z-F or ?*] B

B - a scroll of magic mapping

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@ "Huh? Never seen such a shape! I wonder what's in the center..."
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     |...|>..|      
     |...|.@.|      
     |...|...|      
     |---e---|      
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@ "..."
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11 Comments

#1 Chish Sat, 13 Jun 2009 01:54:17
yawn

#2 Chozo Sat, 13 Jun 2009 03:33:46
bleh

#3 Quint Sat, 13 Jun 2009 06:07:36
........ohhhhhh.

#4 Orl Sat, 13 Jun 2009 06:57:31
do you know the word "feedback"?

#5 zanasj Sat, 13 Jun 2009 11:03:32
... umm...

#6 tarzeau Sat, 13 Jun 2009 12:10:16
haha

#7 xCheckPoint Sat, 13 Jun 2009 20:53:49
Well, besides the yawning for LOTR reference - I thought a bit about it, and floating eye is not _that_ unfunny imho.

#8 anther Sun, 14 Jun 2009 06:34:56
This one's a serious groan. I love it.

#9 LayneRobinson Tue, 16 Jun 2009 12:14:13
I think this comic is getting a bad rap. Worthy of fair to good. Shorter would have been better.....maybe start with #4 and condense the long panel.

#10 mijae Sun, 21 Jun 2009 22:11:06
I love stupid puns too, so the floating eye made me laugh. That's some good feedback from Layne though, the first panels could've been skipped and it probably didn't need the magic-mapping explanation bit at all. Groaner pun-like jokes are usually best when either short and sweet, or super crazy long drawn-out shaggy dog stories. Which I don't think Dudley would handle too well.. oh no, now I might have to try one like that anyway, I apologize to all of you in advance.

#11 Sorceror Fri, 28 Aug 2009 12:05:14
"You are frozen by the Eye of Sauron's gaze" does seem appropriate.

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